P6 has been working hard on creating Imagined Personal Responses to the Lindisfarne raid. We chose to write either from the perspective of the monk or the Viking and hope our stories capture the dramatic atmosphere of the raid. Please comment to let us know if we succeeded in our task :-)
Ellie McD - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/elliem
Abigail - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-57-12
Ibraheem - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-49-26
Cailan - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-46-56
Johanna - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-11-48-26
Rachel - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-11-45-02
Holly - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-53-45
Barbara - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-49-40
Jack - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/18-september-2013-10-25-23
Jennie - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/imagined-personal-response
Sacha - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/imagined-personal-response-1
Jessica - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-12-20-30
Liam - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-10-24-17
Owen - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-12-05-55
Patrick - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-11-49-46
Michael M - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-12-23-05
Ellie McD - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/elliem
Abigail - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-57-12
Ibraheem - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-49-26
Cailan - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-46-56
Johanna - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-11-48-26
Rachel - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-11-45-02
Holly - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-53-45
Barbara - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-09-49-40
Jack - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/18-september-2013-10-25-23
Jennie - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/imagined-personal-response
Sacha - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/imagined-personal-response-1
Jessica - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-12-20-30
Liam - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-10-24-17
Owen - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-12-05-55
Patrick - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-11-49-46
Michael M - https://soundcloud.com/mfinn-1/19-september-2013-12-23-05
Johanna's story is very good, i really felt like i was the character in the story.
ReplyDeleteBy Abbey
Fab story Ellie M it really gripped me with the tension and description of the atmosphere
ReplyDeleteBy Michael C
Well done Abby! I really liked your story.You put in lots of good vocabulary which make it very intresting.
ReplyDeleteJohanna
Ellie story was realy good,it made you feel sorry for Ellie because she had lost everthing by Jack
ReplyDeleteJessica your story was good because you had good detail a loud and clear voice and you really captured the life of a Monk. by Owen
ReplyDeleteI done Owen and i think his was amazing and a bit scary at the same time, Because when he was writing it he had a lot of information and it was scary when the ax went through the women or mans head. by Jessica
ReplyDeleteI listened to cailan and i thought he had very good expression and his ideas were awesome .I thought it was brilliant by Holly
ReplyDeleteMichael M story is excelent and he had a loud clear voice to.
ReplyDeletejacks story isnt good it is amazing he had lots of good vocabulary and in his recording he was loud and clear , the story line is amazing and as soon as i heard it I got gripped and when it fineshed i wanted to listen to more i would highly recomend listening to his story.
ReplyDeleteby Ellie M
Wow P6!!! Well done for writing so many comments.
ReplyDelete-Mrs. Baxter
All the children have done really well - we had first thought that they were reading from a book but then found out that they had written the material themselves! Amazing stuff! Well done everyone!
ReplyDeleteThe proud grandparents of Owen Irvine